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    Bless you all Avalon. This is a beautiful site. We are paving the way for the future, together.

    A poem I felt the sudden urge to share with you;

    “Foreverness written in the sky – always asking me the question “why?”
    The stars are looking down at me with wonder in their eyes.
    The path we wrote below are always represented in the sky forever singing our tones.
    We are looking outwards for answers but the only truth we manage to find are within ourselves, so are the thing we are experiencing actually a form of oneself?
    The source running through us all, forming a magic existence within the soul.
    Bless everyone good and bad, because without your presence we would have neither of that.
    You both are necessary, paving the way for the other – to eventually form into another.
    We are on a path of enlightenment and the journey is full of excitement.
    Live your life to the fullest without regrets, because death are either way relentless.”
    Last edited by Marren; 11th September 2016 at 02:48.

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    Default Re: A poem I wanted to share with you all

    That's lovely Marren. I liked, "the stars are staring down at me with wonder in their eyes."

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    Default Re: A poem I wanted to share with you all

    I find that in most poems i enjoy them more when I read them backwards that is to say starting from the bottom line and working up to the top, so the first line in the poem becomes the last.

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    A lovely poem! It's good to share with each other!

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    Thank from my heart

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