NEW SONG / VIDEO COLLABORATION ...please watch and comment

[Lefty Dave]

Greetings to you all
A couple months ago I had an idea for a song...and wrote some lyrics...and shared them on FASCIBOOK with a fellow songwriter..who said YES...he'd collaberate on it with me...though in truth..we argue incessently online...he being on the left...me being slightly right of Ghengis Khan !!....
Bill Burge is an old friend from high school...and we're still friends (go figure !!) after years of banter on the 'shape' of the world...he wrote the lyrics...and the music...and used my lyrics as the bridge/chorus...and produced this video...AND I COULDN'T BE MORE SATISFIED ...with this result..
PLEASE give it a view...and a comment if you will...
Blessings...Dave,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rtLp8VSddig

[Arcturian108]

I listened to your song. My only critique would be that it seemed more like a talking poem than a song. Otherwise the message was good.

[thepainterdoug]

lefty nice guitar playing, i like the mix and production. not an easy lyric to put to music. i give you credit on a good effort.