Haiku .... current feeling in 3 lines!

[East Sun]

You could talk to me

about anything, logical

within reason, known

[Casey Claar]

Smoothies. Oh how I
love them, let me count the ways!
Mmmm. Mango today!

[bojancan]

Every day is a new and fresh,

kindness is a magic,

honesty is the best policy...

[Bill Ryan]

Posted by bojancan (here)

Every day is a new and fresh,
kindness is a magic,
honesty is the best policy...

Count the syllables
First five, then seven, then five
That's the Haiku way

[Harmony]

sparkling light dancing
upon tiny ripples formed
by the gentle breeze

[grapevine]

When feeling irked, I
ponder its importance.
When none, I let go

[Casey Claar]

Late to bed, early
to rise --there must be something
exciting ahead

[bojancan]

Posted by Bill Ryan (here)

Posted by bojancan (here)

Every day is a new and fresh,
kindness is a magic,
honesty is the best policy...

Count the syllables
First five, then seven, then five
That's the Haiku way

Thank you, Bill! Is this better?

I feel the sun's warmth..

baking on my skin, I watch

the flowers reach me...

[Matthew]

I'll ask a question:

Is it more obvious now?

I think it's clearer

[ZenBaller]

silent implosion
throwing pebbles in lava
the wind doesn't care

[Casey Claar]

Today, all day the
light is strange indeed, a dark
warm golden shadow

Strong winds blowing rain
horizontally sideways
is an oddity

The gusts of both wind
and rain drop temperatures
so low I seek warmth

The unheard of comes
to pass, I am moved to place
socks! upon my feet


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It is a day for the history books. I cannot remember the time this last happened. I never cover my feet. It is like a rule. lol

[Jamie]

Casey Claar So Good,
Spot On Haiku Each Comment,
Words Always Perfect!

[Jamie]

Mara's Nose Sniffs Scent,
Soft Paws on Chilled Mountain Land,
Blind Eyes Sense The Breeze.

[Jamie]

Why So Much Anger?
Please Look From This New Angle.
Life Not Black & White.

[Jamie]

Bill Ryan Gave Thanks,
Feel My Comment Is Worthy!
Thankyou My Dear Brain.


EDIT - I think Everyone's Haikus on this thread have reprogrammed my brain.
My first Haiku took my around an hour. Admittedly because I always second guess myself. These last ones are taking me 5mins each at most.
I guess that is Project Avalon's teaching skills!

[Jamie]

RunningDeer I Miss
Taking A Break From P.A.
Comes Back Soon I Hope

[Matthew]

Personalised verse.
Jambo makes it exciting;
WILL IT BE YOU NEXT?

[Matthew]

Your forum needs you.
Forum donations needed,
$600

[mr.white]

On a Life's Journey...
"Go with the flow" they say...who's?
Smile: Being the flow!

[Jamie]

Why I often find myself on the Meme, Great Quotes or Haiku thread...


Read Serious Thread,
Find My Heart Becoming Sad,
Do Simpler things.