Haiku .... current feeling in 3 lines!

[Ravenlocke]

Posted by Bill Ryan (here)

Posted by Ravenlocke (here)
Rest with God
Now little mouse
And dont come back

Until we humans
Change our ways😢

I’m hoping this change
Will now save any more mice
From the rain barrel.

This mesh trampoline
Was my bright idea today.
It works really well!

Yippee!!! Thank you so much Bill! ❤️

You read my mind,
I wondered if there was something
you could do to protect future mice. 👏🌈🌹
I saw a beautiful rainbow yesterday,
Now I know why.


Thank you! and I truly did not mean
you in particular,
I say it all the time,
Whenever I see dead critters, or roadkill.

Thank You!


Now back to topic, Haiku.

[Victoria]

November sunrise.
Sweeping pond frost in their wake,
wild geese departed.



Topolini trampolini!

...Hero you are, Bill!
Mice will rejoice while bouncing
away from pooled depths.

( I love your trampoline mice, Ravenlocke! )

**Oops! Those are Bill's mice:
darling cartoon characters-
artistic delight!